Between the Lines

…where the magic of writing happens

  • Between the Lines Professional Critique Service

    Laurin runs Between the Lines Critiques, providing professional critiques of manuscripts and synopses for a very reasonable fee. For more information on this service please see the Between the Lines Critiques page.
  • What Between the Lines clients are saying…

    “Laurin Wittig has a phenomenal gift for identifying the problems in a story and, more importantly, suggesting ways to fix them. I can’t imagine trying to write a book without her!”
    Pamela Palmer
    Award-winning author of the Esri series from Sihouette Nocturne and the Feral Warriors series from Avon.

    “Laurin Wittig’s talent for finding the essence of a scene and pointing it in a logical and more focused direction is unmatched. Laurin’s guidance is kind and to the point. More importantly she MOTIVATES!”
    Elizabeth Holcombe
    Author of Heaven and the Heather from Berkley/Jove

    “Laurin Wittig is the sharpest story surgeon you could ever desire. She peels away the unnecessary layers to find the strong bones of your plot and character. Laurin has discerned things about my characters that I was still waiting to discover, and I find her insights stunning.”
    Anne Shaw Moran
    The Marlene Award Finalist

    “Laurin Wittig is a genius. Her insightful comments and suggestions helped me change a good manuscript into a great manuscript. I plan to use her critique service for all my future novels. She's the writing/critique partner that we all secretly hope to find -- someone who will help your book become the best it can be, without any power struggles, jealousy or secret agendas.”
    Beverly Giroux
    Golden Heart Contest Finalist

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Archive for the ‘Guilty Pleasures’ Category

The category name says it all…

Lie to me!

Posted by Laurin Wittig on January 29, 2009

tvI love it when I find a good, writing related reason to watch TV.  Don’t you?  Last night, at the end of my guilty pleasure, American Idol, I caught an episode of a new TV show, Lie to Me. 

Now, after one episode I’m not prepared to say whether this show will stick around, but what caught my attention was the hook — the main group of characters are human lie detectors.   They read body language, and here’s the cool part for writers, they show you what they are looking at, then show you more examples. 

My muses perked up immediately and started looking for body language to use with the gang of characters in my current wip.  I’ll be Tivo-ing this series just to learn the body language tips.    You can catch up on already aired episodes and test your own ability to see a lie (and lots of non-lie emotions, too) at: Lie to Me.  Check it out and see if you don’t find a subtle layer to add to your characterizations.

Now get writing!

Laurin

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